Hello everyone!
This is my contest entry for Ben’s challenge. I wrote it up today (9/2/12) after obtaining an idea for it this morning.
I don’t know how good it is (I’ve never entered a writing contest before), but I thought I’d give it a try!
I know it was in the challenge rules to include a page of a different project we’ve been working on, but, due to certain complications, I’m not going to be able to fulfill that part of the challenge. I apologize to Ben for this fact, and if I do not qualify, I understand.
Anyways, without another word not pertaining to my entry, my contest entry!:
The bright, LED headlights of my truck illuminate the dirt and sand ground before me, giving me the light I need to be able to drive off-road in this pitch-black night.
Though, I know this area so well that I might not even need my headlights. I’ve driven it so many times, this long trek from the nearest town to collect supplies, to the secluded place I call home.
The wide range of light from my headlights is still appreciated, I fear I would unwittingly broadside or ram one of the innumerable stone spires that give this place character, even after how long I’ve been driving this route.
I hear, can almost feel, and see the sand and dirt kicking up from the tires of my truck; creating dust clouds and throwing small stones. Erasing any sign of the car wash I had taken the truck through hours ago.
But hey, what could I expect? This is the South Dakota Badlands, after all.
The GPS console fitted into my truck suddenly beeps, notifying me that I am within a hundred yards of my home. I press a button above the console in response, instantly sending a message to the computer system of my home to activate the outside lights.
It obeys, and a split-second later, the outside lights flicker on, eliminating the cloak of darkness that had been hiding my home.
My home, though inelegant, will always be a jewel to me.
It’s basically a huge, massive garage, built to house and give me a space to build and work on my creations. It is outfitted and stocked with pretty much any and everything I could need for what I do. It doesn’t have an upper-floor, due mostly to what I house in it, but it does, however, have a number of underground levels, some of which I use for mass-storage.
And when I say ‘mass-storage’, I mean mass-storage.
I pull my truck up next to the massive garage, put it in park, take out the key, and then exit.
I casually walk back to my trucks large bed, in which is the supplies I obtained at town many hours ago. The supplies are, in majority, items to assist in my building. Mostly consisting of special parts and a certain AEF (Advanced Energy Filter).
I open up the truck bed, take out a few bags, and then head for the average-sized door of my home. (Let’s just say I have a few non-average-sized doors.)
The door is locked, as I always make sure it is before leaving, and I stop to unlock it.
“2056-1134-7607” I say, unlocking the door by voice command.
It buzzes, and then automatically opens, giving me way into the air-conditioned interior of my home.
I walk in, the door automatically closing behind me.
“Lights.” I say plainly, and the interior is suddenly bathed in the bright LED light emanating from the overhead fixtures.
The light reveals the interior, and I once again let out a sigh of satisfaction as I gaze at the twelve battle machines (positioned along the walls to the left and right of me) that are some of my greatest creations.
They are Mechs, or more specifically, Battle Mechs.
So…what’s he going to do with his machines? Is there more to this?
Well, I’ll explain:
The character in this is seventeen-year-old Jayden Flynn Priesten, Mech designer and builder, engineer wiz, and nano-tech genius. Jayden lives in the South Dakota Badlands so he can test and build his Mechs in secluded areas and without the worry of civilians nearby. He gets his funding and supplies from two sources:
1. Stocks in his fathers company, Priesten Industries.
2. Secret donations of a hundred thousand every month.
Jayden belongs to a very rich family, the Priestens, and his inspiration for building and working with technology came from his father, Taberg Priesten, who generally designs war machines and technological energy innovations.
Anyways, that’s a small look at Jayden, though there’s a lot more to him. Now to your questions:
He’s going to do a lot with his machines, but I can’t say any of them due to the fact that that information is currently classified.
And yes, there is more to this, a TON more. Jayden is going to become a main character in my series: Kindred Spirits.
– Munchkin
O_O That is amazing… although it’s rather cruel to cut us off just as it was getting good. 🙁 I wanted to see him destroy stuff with his Mechs. 🙂 Good entry, tho! And I guess I’ll accept the lack of other material, as you seem to write more than anyone else in this group on a regular basis.
You really like it? I am enlightened! Yeah, I apologize for the abrupt ending. Don’t worry though, you will (if I ever release it) see Jayden destroy stuff with his Mechs. 😉
Thanks, Ben! I appreciate your comments!
– Munchkin