Elinor: prologue

Hey everyone! Just posting the prologue from my new book, Ell (name subject to change)!

First off, you’ll probably notice similarities between this and one of my previous entries. Rest assured that they are unrelated and follow two entirely separate storylines (Also, in this piece, the protagonist is only dreaming, whereas in my other story bit, it was actually happening in real life).

Also, apologies for the shortness of this post,  I didn’t have time to finish Chapter 1 as well. Don’t worry, I have  the whole story mapped out, so if I die before I finish it, someone else can do it for me!

So, without further ado, ELL!!!

*Edit: Updated to Prologue 2.0! 😀

Prologue

 

 

The White Room was seven feet square, devoid of furnishings, a mere box of a room.

It had been part of a wine cellar many decades ago, part of the original house, and had remained intact through the various renovations the old building had undergone. Painted an off-white color by the house’s previous occupants, the room hadn’t held wine in over thirty years. Stripped of its oaken wine racks, the room had been repurposed as something far more sinister.

A torture cell.

The room’s only illumination came from a naked bulb, swinging gently on its seven-inch cord. She tried to ignore it, squeezing her eyes shut, but the light was unrelenting, glowing crimson through her eyelids. The thick concrete walls deadened outside sound, leaving the room in relative silence. The only noises were the low hum of the burning filament, and the soft sobbing of the room’s sole occupant.

The girl was half-dead from hunger and thirst, crumpled in a corner as far from the light as she could get. Her black hair hung in sweat-soaked strands, clinging to her pale face. It had been at least two days. Two days in the room where time had no meaning, where it was always harsh, searing daylight. Earlier, she had considered smashing the bulb, ending the torment forever, but she had long ago lost the strength to move. Her arms hung loosely at her sides, raw and running crimson from numerous cuts. In the end, it didn’t matter. Without the light, the blackness would come. And the blackness was worse. Much, much worse, she was sure of it.

Besides, Daddy was coming. He would rescue her from this place, and take her to her favorite restaurant, and buy her a milkshake like he always did, and everything would be all right. She just had to wait… and wait…

So she gritted her teeth and bore on.

The memories of her arrival remained lost in the swirling cacophony of heat and pain. She remembered being dragged down a steep flight of stairs, the wooden planks slamming against her heels. A rough voice in her ear, rasping filthy words through broken teeth, blood and saliva flecking her cheek. Then came the concrete floor, rough and uneven. She had broken free then, swinging with every ounce of her strength, cracking his jawbone. The floor had rushed up to knock the wind from her, only to recede again as she was yanked back up amid a barrage of curses.

He had dragged her the rest of the way by her hair.

The White Room was becoming unbearably hot, a seven-by-seven box of hell with one little girl packaged up inside it. She tried to breathe, coughed out the air, forced her lungs to draw it in, to take the oxygen even as it burned her. Had it lasted months? Years? Time didn’t matter any more. Everything was pain. The heat, the cuts and bruises, the horrible stretching in her mind as rational thought slowly, slowly gave way…

The door was open. She had forgotten there was a door at all. It blended perfectly with the walls, the same stark white, the same maddening chalk tone as the rest of the room. And it was hanging open, a crack in the unbreakable hurt that was White Room.

A breath of cool, damp air swirled lazily through the haze, sending goosebumps up and down her arms. Slowly, very slowly, she dragged herself to her feet, wobbling a bit as she stood. The darkness seemed to call to her, a reprieve from the searing light. A way out, a way back…

A way back to Daddy.

Then she was outside, in the blackness, and with the darkness came fear, an absolute terror. The sudden chill, the deadly stillness, the feeling that something, or perhaps a multitude of somethings, were watching her, smiling, grinning with razor teeth as they drew nearer…

She fell backwards, but the White Room was gone. All that remained was the pitch blackness, and the Things. The Things creeping around her, their long fingers brushing past her face, skittering across her ankles like enormous insects. And she could hear them, too. Whispering, whistling softly, rustling in the dark. They spoke words too soft for her to catch, chuckling quietly, growing ever closer.

There was a metal cigarette lighter in her hand. She didn’t know how long she had been holding it, and it didn’t matter. She had to see, she had to have light, however small. The thought of what she might see made her hand shake, and she almost dropped the lighter, but in the end, the darkness scared her more.

The gear turned once in a spray of sparks, but the wick didn’t catch. The whispers rose in alarm, and she panicked, clicking the igniter over and over until, finally, it caught. A tiny flame flickered into existence, and she held it up before her, desperate to see…

A mutilated face grinned at her, inches away.

She couldn’t move, couldn’t cry out. The thing remained still as well, and for a brief second she hoped beyond hope that it stay where it was, silent and menacing, for eternity…

Then it screamed, its cheeks ripping apart as its mouth opened impossibly wide, and it swallowed her whole.

 

 

 

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The soda can bounced once, the sound lost in the clatter of thousands of displaced goods thundering to the floor. Araxis deftly avoided the collapsing shelving, batting away a cereal box flipping by his head.

“I’ll repeat myself only once, Miru. You are merely delaying the inevitable.”

The reply came in the form of a soup can, hurled with deadly force at Araxis’ left eye.

Araxis sighed, lifting a hand. “Dissever.”

The can became a fine mist for the duration of exactly four seconds, reassembling itself well behind its intended target. It left a dent in the wall, clattering to the floor and rolling out of sight.

“Miru, this is a public place. A supermarket, for heaven’s sakes. It will not take long for the authorities to-”

An empty shopping cart, resting against a wall, suddenly crumpled, as if crushed by an invisible compactor. The pressure grew so intense, the metal began to superheat, turing a mottled black.

Sighing again, Araxis adjusted his necktie. “Dissever works on all physical objects. At the very least, you could do me the honor of remembering what I taught you. This is embarrassing.”

The mesh ball began to spin in place, picking up speed.

“Enough. This ends, now! Interra-

The ball was humming now, letting out intermittent screeches as its whirling surface occasionally brushed the floor.

“…Ah, screw it. Dissever.

The metal orb became a silver dust… which continued to spin, leaving long gouges in the tile below.

“Oh.”

The cloud lurched forward… and Araxis ran, although the word “ran” hardly did him justice. His feet cracked the white tile, his legs cycling faster than the human eye could hope to follow as they propelled him forward at remarkable speeds.

Behind him, Dissever‘s effects were wearing off. The metal shards regained their shape, dropping to the floor with a bone-shaking crunch. The newly reconstituted mesh ball began to roll, gaining momentum, pinballing down the aisle.

“Miru, you idiot! That’s a Live Magic! If it hits me, the explosion will kill us both! Call it off!”

There was no answer.

Muttering curses, Araxis charged past the rows of assorted fishing goods lining the walls, frantically running through what few options he had. The supermarket was quite busy, or rather, it had been. A rather complicated Moratorium had suspended the occupants in a dreamlike state, leaving them frozen where they were. That also meant that any and all actions taken would potentially affect the slumbering civilians. He couldn’t let that orb detonate.

“AI, how much do we have left?” he panted out. His burning lungs provided a painful reminder of exactly how little exercise had had been getting over the past few years.

A machine voice, emanating from the device he wore on his wrist, responded to his question.“Systema magic at %40. Recharge rate %5 per minute.”

“Blast. How did it get so low?”

“Blanket spell ‘Moratorium’, cast at 0915 hours this morning, resulted in a %55 drain.”

“Alright, alright. Let me think. Do we have any defensive spells in your mainframe?”

“Negative. You specified target-neutralizing Systema only.”

“Oh, it’s all my fault, eh? Well, you’re the military tactical genius, so tell me what to do!”

“Define.”

Araxis was beginning to turn red, and it wasn’t due to the running.

“How do I stop the freaking ball, you ridiculous machine?”

“Request is not within my present capabilities.”

“Screw you, too.”

Hopping a produce display, Araxis landed awkwardly, stumbling slightly to the left. The misstep saved his life; the deadly orb, now almost crimson with heat, decimated the display inches behind him. Corn popped like gunfire, joining the shattered wooden stand in a chaotic cloud of dust and shrapnel. The metal ball immediately spun in reverse, but it was slow to turn, fighting its own momentum.

Interlocking his fingers, Araxis hurled out another spell, “Friez, level two.

“Insufficient power to complete level two. Downgrade?”

The orb caught, began to gain speed.

“Yes, yes, do it now, or it’ll be…”

A bolt of blue energy leapt from his fingers, spraying out like water from a hose. Wherever it touched a solid surface, the jet became a solid coating of ice. The murderous mesh ball froze over in an instant, stopping dead in mid-aisle.

“Systema at %10. Recharge rate %5 per minute.”

“Now why did I have to think of that? You were built to help me fight this kinda stuff, and you couldn’t even…”

“It was illogical to use an ice spell in such a fashion. Your power level is no longer sufficient to confront Miru head-on.”

“It was that or die, stupid!”

“The proper solution was to find and eliminate Miru directly. Upon his neutralization, the murder spell would have collapsed.”

Araxis straightened his suit coat, taking several deep breaths. When he spoke, his voice was deceptively calm. “Then why, pray tell, did you not inform me of the proper course of action as soon as you thought of it?”

“Your orders, as of 0700 hours this morning, were to ‘remain silent until information was specifically asked for’.”

“I believe my exact words were, ‘shut up when no one’s talking to you’.”

“Precisely.”

With a superhuman effort, Araxis forced himself to calm down.

“Very well. I don’t have enough magic to locate Miru. Can you do that much?”

“Indeed.”

Araxis was somewhat surprised.

“Miru is precisely five feet, six inches to your 6 o’clock position.”

Very, very slowly, Araxis turned around.

Miru brushed an imaginary speck of dust from his white overcoat. “You need to be more observant, Captain. I could have killed you several times over.”

Araxis tried not to make any sudden moves; nothing to set Miru off. The Systema Overdrive was clearly visible on Miru’s wrist, blinking as it drew in the quantum-level particles floating through the air. There was no sign of the Chaos chip, but it was only an inch in length, and could be in any of Miru’s many pockets.

“You stopped the ‘Furea’, Captain? Impressive. Live Magic is tough to counter.”

“Miru, you can’t escape. SWAT has the building surrounded. MAGE is on the way to back them up. They’re sending a team of Navy SEALs, for heaven’s sake! You may have stolen Overdrive, and that infernal spell chip, but you can’t get us all. In the end, there’s a thousand of us, and one of you. Now, if you’d like to surrender, I can guarantee that-”

“Shut up! Do you realize the power this thing has? I could level the world with this! Nothing scares me now, Araxis. Not you, not MAGE, not the whole damn world.” Miru’s hand came up, and the Overdrive screeched as it prepared to activate. “With this, I control everything!”

The floor erupted, tossing Araxis through the air. He had gone mere feet before the roof collapsed inward, burying him in rubble.

“Gravity, momentum, entropy! I own them all! I can do anything, captain! Anything I want!”

The debris became a cloud of atoms, and Araxis staggered up… only to be thrown back by a second explosion.

He landed heavily on a pastry cart, a bin of multicolored doughnuts cushioning his fall. Chocolate cream filling splattered everywhere, making the floor slick as Araxis scrambled to his feet.

“AI! What can I use?”

“Basic fire online. Basic water online. Two types sleep spell online, although Overdrive nullifies both. Ice available in seven seconds…”

“Useless, useless, useless!”

“Enemy is approaching from the left.”

Sparks danced like a million fireflies, and the tiny bakery became ash. Miru strode through, soot blackening his pristine coat.

“I have taken great care to avoid killing innocents, Araxis. The least you could do is stay still and let me kill you!

Araxis took off again, a cacophany of magical blasts tearing apart the ground behind him.

“AI, can you talk to Overdrive’s AI? Maybe shut it down?”

“Possible. Overdrive does not give or receive transmissions, but it can have information uploaded to it via chip. Should a shutdown program be written to chip, the Overdrive should be unable to ignore it.”

“So I’d have to manually stick the chip into the Overdrive’s port, right?”

“Correct. Chances of successful completion; %0.001. Do not attempt.”

“What if you were able to touch Overdrive? Could you communicate through its shell?”

“Confirmed. I would require seven seconds of contact. Chances of successful completion; %0.00001. Do not attempt.”

“Don’t tell me what to do.”

“Confirmed.”

“Unless it’s vitally important!”

“Confirmed.”

“Good. Is telepathy online?”

“Please hold, switching chipset. Confirmed. Telepathy availible. Drain rate is %1 per minute use on small objects, %15 per minute use large objects. Systema at %16. Activate telepathy now?”

“Yeah. Let’s go with Seipium. And yes, I do know how to use it. No tutorials, please.”

Araxis ducked behind a cooler full of frozen hotdogs, trying to calm his breathing.

In the distance, Miru chuckled. “I can see you, captain. Come out and play!”

The hotdog cooler groaned as invisible fingers coiled around it, pulling it slowly away from the wall. Araxis moved with it, doing his best to maintain his cover.

“You have three seconds, captain!”

Araxis didn’t answer, lifting both hands. “Seipium,” he whispered.

“Three! Two! One! Zero!”

The cooler tore in two with a painful screech of metal ripping apart. Araxis snapped his hands forward, sending an entire aisle of canned soups hurtling through the opening. Miru was caught off-guard, but recovered before the attack could do damage. The cans burst apart, splattering across a shimmering crimson shield that rose up to protect Miru.

In Araxis’ head, AI spoke. “Systema at %0. No chance of recovery.”

“An amusing attempt, Araxis! But no physical object can-”

The Overdrive spoke, its voice clear and smooth. “Advisement. Enemy is attempting to damage my core with telepathy. Type of attack, Flat Magic ‘Seipium’.”

“Oh? Well then… Overdrive! Activate cycle two! Engage the Chaos chip.”

With a horrible groan, every object within a hundred feet of the Overdrive ceased to exist, leaving Miru floating above a smooth crater. Bisected boxes, shelves, and grocery items tumbled into the depression, only to meet the same fate; smashed apart at an atomic level by the Chaos program.

“Purge complete. All incoming signals erased.”

“You see, Araxis? You are completely powerless! I’m growing tired of this. You ruined my initial plans by showing up early. You’re an exceptional detective, I’ll give you that. However, it’s time for everything to go away. Overdrive, how long till full power?”

“Factoring the drain produced by the Chaos chip, thirty seconds to %100.”

“Enjoy your last thirty seconds on earth, Araxis. Overdrive, load Exendariaum World Bender.

“Advisement. World Bender at top power will do sufficient damage to the earth to disrupt all known bio-systems. There is no logical reason to activate this at full power. Also; program is experimental, and may potentially injure you.”

“Disregard the safety protocol.”

“There is no logical reason to-”

Disregard the blasted protocol!”

“Affirmative.”

Araxis stepped up to the crater’s edge.

“Ah, there you are! Pity I have no more Systema to waste on you. Trying to end the world and all, you know. What will you do? Chaos is still active. Nothing can get through to me.”

Araxis sighed, sitting on an overturned case of beer. “It doesn’t matter. My systema is gone. That was my last go.”

Miru frowned. “So sad. Are you just giving up, then? Not what I expected of you at all.”

With a sad smile, Araxis shook his head. “I never give up, Miru. Never.”

“Download complete,” said AI

“Download complete,” repeated Overdrive.

“What?” said Miru, an instant before he fell from the air, landing hard in the blast crater. He lay there a minute, uncomprehending, then rose to his feet with a roar.

“What did you do, Araxis?”

Araxis held up his arms, revealing his bare wrists.

It took Miru a second to realize what he was seeing. “What… Where’s your…”

“I threw it with the cans. Systema devices are magic-proof, Miru. It went right through your shield.”

Miru drew the Overdrive up to his face. Clinging magnetically to its side was a small, watchlike device; Araxis’ Systema collector, hidden amongst the coils of wires.

“What is this?”

“I had my AI tell the Overdrive to shut down. Contact was needed for that. You would never have let me get close, so I had to get it to you another way.”

Miru tore the collector free, crushing it beneath his heel. “That was a mad strategy, captain. What if I had opted to kill you right away?”

“Then I would have died, and the overdrive would still have been stopped. Now,” Araxis drew his sidearm, “You can come with me quietly, or I can shoot you in the leg and carry you. Which will it be?”

 

The first drops of rain cut through the muggy summer air, spilling over the glossy helmets and armored trucks below. Searchlights cut through the gloom; engines idled as, one by one, sirens ceased to wail. The MAGE commander barked a question into his radio, waiting sullenly for an answer as water dripped from his hood. In exactly one minute’s time, the radio came to life, transmitting a mix of words and static. The commander nodded to himself, taking a bullhorn from under his coat.

“This is MAGE commander Sorra; all units stand down. Captain Araxis has apprehended the rouge MAGE operative, as well as the stolen items. Weapons to standby, he’s coming out.”

A short story by Ben… rated R, btw… :)

 

Bullet Dancer

-Benjamin A.C.

 

 

Very few people understand me, although I cannot recall ever trying to explain myself. Some have labeled me a murderer, a killer who kills for pleasure. Some call me a terrorist, a man bent on destroying society. Others simply call me a soulless, evil monster.

In some respects, I am all that and more.

If one knew the whole story, one would not be so quick to judge me. I still have roughly an hour before Warakov’s plane lands. I am well hidden; he will not see me, of that I am certain. He will not, but the others will… but that shall come later.

Now, I will tell my story.

My name is Trice, and I am four days old. I was born in the Black Room, or rather, I awoke there. Immense, yet finite, the room held no secrets. The floors, walls, and ceiling were pure black marble, cool but not cold. Every angle was perfect, every wall a study in perfect symmetry, yet somehow, it had an air of unknown horrors, of blood and pain and death. I did not fear it. It seemed right, as if the sole purpose of the Black Room was to remind me of these things, to remind me that they belonged with me.

That it was a part of me.

I awoke in a corner, leaning against the wall. My memory was blank; not the blankness of lost memories, but the clearness of things never known. For a long time, I could not move. Weakness held me in place for what seemed like days. Consciousness came and went, strange shapes swam through my mind. Sometimes I slept; always a dreamless, heavy sleep that left me more exhausted upon awakening than I had been before I had rested.

As time moved on, I grew stronger. I learned to crawl in seven minutes, to walk in two hours, and in just under a day I could run, flying the length of the Room as fast as my legs would carry me. I never tired, never became hungry. At least, not at first…

The man appeared four days later. He came while I was sleeping, and in the morning (or what passed for morning) he was lying on the floor. A wrinkled grey suit hung loosely from his body, badly torn. His blond hair had been dyed red with blood, and his pale face was contorted in agony. I walked up to him, curious. At that point, I had never before seen a man.

As I approached, he lifted his head. His eyes were blue, a shocking azure blue, a color I knew nothing of. He spoke to me, the first words I had ever heard.

“Please… help me…”

I knew his words, and what they meant, but I did nothing, still staring.

“Don’t you understand? I’m hurt. I’ve… I’ve been shot…” When I again did not reply, he grew angry. “Hey, listen! I need help! I’m gonna bleed to death! I was kidnapped… I don’t know what they wanted. When I asked questions, they shot me. God, it hurts…”

His eyes met mine, then widened in fear. “You… you’re one of them! That mask… you… you’re…” Blood trickled from his mouth, and he coughed, spraying me with reddened saliva. I ignored it, instead exploring my own face. The word “Mask”, and the idea is conveyed, immediately revealed the true purpose of what I had assumed to be a natural part of my facial structure.

Pulling the mask free, I turned it over, staring into its eye holes. It was red, like the man’s blood, only brighter. I had nothing to compare it to, so I compared it to the man’s face. It seemed more or less the same, only smoother, with no facial hair. It had no straps or bands, but when I replaced it, it seemed to cling to my skin, holding it in place.

I decided to speak. My first attempt to talk came out a high-pitched eeh sound, causing the man to wriggle back in fear and surprise. I cleared my throat and tried again.

“What… name?”

The man was confused. “What is my name? What dos it matter? I’m going to die if you don’t…!”

“What is name?”

“I’m Ren Lehov, I work at Crom Chemical company, and I need medical assistance NOW!”

Falling back on his side with a gasp, he tore at his shirt-front, exposing the wounds covering his chest. It was a wonder he was still alive. Forty bullet-holes stitched lines across Lehov’s torso, sketching out a series of letters in the torn flesh; TARGET.

The word hit me like a physical blow. Lights, pictures, sounds, and intense emotion flashed through my brain like an electric shock. Memories swirled, people, places, items lost long ago… and vanished as fast as they had come.

Lehov winced. “Please, you have to-”

I kicked him. It was almost reflex, like swatting a mosquito buzzing in my ear. His chest imploded in a thunderous cracking of bones, and a geyser of blood sprayed from his mouth. Reaching down, I lifted him off his feet. At this juncture, I realized that my body was no longer under my command. I also realized that I did not care.

With a single punch, I broke his spine.

A second punch caved in his face.

A third decapitated him.

I then stopped. For the first time in my short existence, I was confused. I had not felt any sense of aggression towards Lehrov. His death seemed… unnecessary. Bad. I hadn’t wanted him dead.

It disturbed me greatly.

I placed the body where the head had fallen, retreating to the far corner of the room. The mangled corpse suddenly sickened me, and I squeezed my eyes shut, trying to forget it was there.

“Excellent performance, Trice.”

The voice came from somewhere high above. My eyes snapped open, searching, but there was no one. The room was empty, except for…

The room was empty.

The body was gone.

In an instant, I was at the spot where Lehov had been, running my hands across the floor. They came up sticky with blood, and I quickly shook them off. So he had been there. I had not imagined it. But… where had he gone?

The voice was with me again. “You are fast, and you are strong. Your stamina is unmatched, your fighting abilities limitless. You, the first of four, will aid us in our-”

It cut out abruptly, replaced with a mechanical clicking sound. I stood alert, waiting for it to continue. I must have stood for hours, unmoving, listening to the ticking sound.

Finally, a voice spoke, but it was not the same. It was as cold as the walls it emanated from, over-pronouncing every syllable. “Error. System has encountered a critical… error, core data not error, corruption in, error…”

The words confused me. Some part of me knew the words, but I could not determine their meaning. All I knew for certain was that something, somewhere, had gone terribly wrong.

The wall cracked. I was instantly alert, watching intently as symmetrical lines crawled across the surface. A section collapsed altogether, leaving a perfectly rectangular hole six feet tall and two and a half feet wide. Sunlight streamed in, blinding me. The whiteness was both frightening, and, at the same time, comforting.

It was the first time I felt warmth.

I moved towards it, the computer voice still droning behind me.

 

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